Score: 3

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submission: TF2 Tutorial - Medic

date: May 4, 2008

A very basic tutorial if you ask me. I have over 130 hours logged playing as medic, and I honestly can't believe you have more than 10 with the content of this tutorial. You don't go over anything really important, like WHEN and WHY to uber, when to pull out your bonesaw, how to stay alive...basic things you learn when playing medic for so long. Also, demo man is always better than heavy to taking sentries, even if there are 3+ because heavies most certainly DO fly, and when they do they are useless. Secondly, you should never uber a spy, that is just the dumbest thing I've ever heard, because it will most likely just alert the other team that there is an uber behind them. Same thing with ubering an engineer. In pub games it's a big no-no. Even in a clan match or scrimmage I would say no, unless he is your absolute last chance to defend a point or with the game.

Score: 8

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submission: News Reporter IV

date: March 15, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Heh, that was one of the better episodes of News Reporter in my opinion. I like how you point out how news stations (even the ones over in America) focus on unimportant things or focus on things for too long, over things that should probably be covered a little more. This was pretty funny, made me laugh a few times.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why couldn't he watch soap operas? Did I miss something in another episode?

Score: 8

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submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 22, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Well, the title described most of this movie. I liked the way you animated the backgrounds to make a realistic looking movement of the submarine though the water. The ending was pretty funny, and overall and interesting movie to watch and enjoy.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought it was a little lacking in the storyline. The ending was a bit predictable, and there wasn't much to say about the rest of it.

Score: 7

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submission: Swirl Around

date: February 23, 2008

Not a bad song. It has a fast beat, which I find interesting and a lot of percussion. Some parts of this sounded a little bit disjointed to me, especially right in the middle, though for the most part, this sounded pretty well put together. The only thing I dislike about this song is the end, where you pretty much stop everything and replay the very beginning of the song. I think you should have added something to distinguish the beginning from the end.

Score: 7

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submission: Speedevil

date: February 17, 2008

I really like how many different genres you work in, and do a decent job at all of them. This song...definitely an appropriate name for this seeing how quick paced it is. I really like the synth you added in the background during this. It seems to give it an evil feeling to it, which I thought was neat. Good song overall.

Score: 7

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submission: Shine

date: February 17, 2008

Well, nothing wrong with this loop. It loops very smoothly and can be listened to over and over with little problems. I think you should have expanded a bit more though. The base of this is very nice and making a full song out of it would have definitely produced a good one.