Score: 7

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submission: Swirl Around

date: February 23, 2008

Not a bad song. It has a fast beat, which I find interesting and a lot of percussion. Some parts of this sounded a little bit disjointed to me, especially right in the middle, though for the most part, this sounded pretty well put together. The only thing I dislike about this song is the end, where you pretty much stop everything and replay the very beginning of the song. I think you should have added something to distinguish the beginning from the end.

Score: 7

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submission: Speedevil

date: February 17, 2008

I really like how many different genres you work in, and do a decent job at all of them. This song...definitely an appropriate name for this seeing how quick paced it is. I really like the synth you added in the background during this. It seems to give it an evil feeling to it, which I thought was neat. Good song overall.

Score: 7

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submission: Shine

date: February 17, 2008

Well, nothing wrong with this loop. It loops very smoothly and can be listened to over and over with little problems. I think you should have expanded a bit more though. The base of this is very nice and making a full song out of it would have definitely produced a good one.

Score: 6

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submission: Sad Tune

date: February 17, 2008

Well, it was good and bad. I liked the xylophone sounds in the beginning, but I really think you forced the sad feeling in this. The synth just didn't sound good at all with the xylophone, and then just the synth in the second half really didn't sound too cool at all.

Score: 8

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submission: Haunted Hobbit

date: February 17, 2008

A very good track. It's got a very cool beat to it. I don't really get a spooky feeling from it, or really understand the title of this at all, but it was still fun to listen to, since it changes tune a few times throughout. Great job on this song.

Score: 5

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submission: Fallen Leaves

date: February 17, 2008

I'm a bit torn on this one. I like the calmness of this in the second half, but I think it should have definitely built to something better. The first 15 seconds of this really didn't match much with the later half, and the quality of the song overall seemed lower than normal.

Score: 9

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submission: Adrenaline*

date: February 17, 2008

Even though this is a genre you don't normally make music in, this is still a good track, better than most in its genre. It loops very nicely and has a nice sound to it. This will probably get used in quite a few submissions on NG if people listen to it.

Score: 9

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submission: Cyan

date: February 17, 2008

You never bore me with your excellent Jazz music that you make. The piano throughout this is very nice, goes well with everything, and I really like the nice addition of some kind of wind instrument at around 2 minutes. In fact, you have a great combination of percussion in here too. A very calming track, and another one to add to your resume.

Score: 9

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submission: Untitled*

date: February 10, 2008

Well I'm quite used to hearing Jazz from you, but you seem to have a knack for techno as well. I really liked the BPM changes in this, they made the song interesting to listen to. You had a lot of different instruments used in this and it was quite a combination of several different genres. Great stuff.

Score: 9

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submission: Sometime

date: February 3, 2008

Your first try at a classical tune, and you seem to have a knack for it! I don't really hear what most other people are saying about it sounding awkward, I think it sounds just fine. I definitely think your jazz stuff is of a higher quality, but anyway, keep up the good work!