Score: 3

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submission: TF2 Tutorial - Medic

date: May 4, 2008

A very basic tutorial if you ask me. I have over 130 hours logged playing as medic, and I honestly can't believe you have more than 10 with the content of this tutorial. You don't go over anything really important, like WHEN and WHY to uber, when to pull out your bonesaw, how to stay alive...basic things you learn when playing medic for so long. Also, demo man is always better than heavy to taking sentries, even if there are 3+ because heavies most certainly DO fly, and when they do they are useless. Secondly, you should never uber a spy, that is just the dumbest thing I've ever heard, because it will most likely just alert the other team that there is an uber behind them. Same thing with ubering an engineer. In pub games it's a big no-no. Even in a clan match or scrimmage I would say no, unless he is your absolute last chance to defend a point or with the game.

Score: 8

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submission: News Reporter IV

date: March 15, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Heh, that was one of the better episodes of News Reporter in my opinion. I like how you point out how news stations (even the ones over in America) focus on unimportant things or focus on things for too long, over things that should probably be covered a little more. This was pretty funny, made me laugh a few times.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why couldn't he watch soap operas? Did I miss something in another episode?

Score: 8

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submission: Cow in Submarine

date: February 22, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Well, the title described most of this movie. I liked the way you animated the backgrounds to make a realistic looking movement of the submarine though the water. The ending was pretty funny, and overall and interesting movie to watch and enjoy.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought it was a little lacking in the storyline. The ending was a bit predictable, and there wasn't much to say about the rest of it.

Score: 9

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submission: Inward Singing

date: February 17, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Haha, and excellent movie definitely deserving of the daily first award. Not only were your graphics very detailed and animated pretty well, what really made me love this movie was the great acting and your ability to move it straight into Flash. You really captured the emotion of both characters and did a nice job with the voice acting and animating. Very funny as well. Great job!

^^Needs Improving^^
Why did the character drawings change for a few seconds towards the end of this movie? That was pretty strange.

Score: 7

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submission: Mouse Avoider #30

date: February 17, 2008

^^Good Points^^
It's a whole lot better than most people's first games, which are usually mouse avoiders like this one. What you did differently was add a nice graphical interface that looks very professional. For the most part a simple and run of the mill game, but you made it look nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
My major peev on this game was the fact that you HAD to cheat on the first level with absolutely not tip or advice to do so. I think this will hurt you when people who don't know the methods for cheating come to play this game.

Score: 2

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submission: Windows Errors 2007

date: February 17, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Well, I guess if you have something against windows this would be a good slideshow to look at. To me, it's more boring than anything.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is basically just a slideshow of a bunch of images that you didn't even make yourself, rather just compiled in a very simple manner in Flash. Nothing interesting graphically and not the best interface either. Your buttons are just text and when you get to the end, you have to click "Prev" 30 some times to get to the beginning.

Score: 4

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submission: Droids Vs Aliens

date: February 17, 2008

^^Good Points^^
I liked all of the sound effects you added into this. There wasn't a moment in this move where good sound effects weren't used and used well. The animations wasn't too bad, though I still have some suggestions on it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of hard to follow. I think you need to try to change the camera angles some more to get better views of what is going on.

Score: 10

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submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 158

date: February 11, 2008

^^Good Points^^
What an interesting looking Pokemon. Hitler has a nice looking tail and a nice skin tone. Another excellent addition to the series. Great job once again!

^^Needs Improving^^
The music doesn't really fit. I really like the song, but this Pokemon looks like he is about to jump out and start licking my face, but the music is like sexy slow dancing music.

Score: 10

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submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 159

date: February 11, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, I like the background in this. This Pokemon looks kind of like a Hippo to me, so the swampy lake thing in the background fit him quite well. Hitler got dressed up quite a bit more than normal in this episode, which was interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not too much different between the two episodes, but there isn't much you can change I suppose.

Score: 10

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submission: Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 157

date: February 11, 2008

^^Good Points^^
Another pretty lame and boring evolution, but you at least made this one quite different from the last episode to end some repetition. I find Hitler's head to look quite comical, and the new background is refreshing and appropriate.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, Hitler's head looks kind of strange in this episode, but I guess I'm just saying that here because I have nothing else to say.