Score: 5

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submission: Episode Intro Test

date: December 2, 2009

It was good for an intro. Good graphics and effects to make it look nicely done. Also, the intro was very short, yet it gave a nice introduction to the episode. I think the briefness of this is definitely a plus, as I see a lot of people put very long introductions onto their Flash episodes.

Score: 3

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submission: Bill Gates on Facebook

date: December 2, 2009

Not a bad concept for a video. You definitely could have done more with this though. I think you could have perhaps taken the scene away from the computer screen and shown Bill doing something. The way you did this was rather boring in my opinion.

Score: 6

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submission: Can i have a kleenex ?

date: December 2, 2009

Not too bad at all. For your first animation, it's really good, since you weren't afraid to try stuff in three dimensions. This is definitely above average work for someone just learning animating. Definitely keep at it. Hope to see some expanded pieces from you in the future.

Score: 8

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submission: Violinist on a Building

date: December 2, 2009

Heh, I wish I knew the context of this audio clip you used. Care to enlighten me? I thought this movie was pretty hilarious to watch. The timing with the music was great, and I enjoyed the appearance of Duck.fla. Animations were funny. Classic stuff right here. Keep it up!

Score: 7

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submission: Dr. Horrible Monologue

date: December 2, 2009

An interesting take on the mind of a super villain. It was humorous to hear him talk about his problems, which were surprisingly just like the problems of normal people I suppose. That parallel was quite funny. At times the animation looked a bit awkward, but overall, the artwork was well done. Nice movie, good luck in your class.

Score: 4

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submission: MrsCriblam Kills A Whale

date: December 2, 2009

A pretty lack luster effort for the most part. There really wasn't any one part that really stood out against the others. They were all pretty poorly done. Loud noises and poor graphics were what brought this down. The only part that was mildly good was the Johnny Bravo reference. Other than that, wouldn't want to get this as a birthday gift.

Score: 5

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submission: Flee fla Floo

date: December 2, 2009

Hmmm, I don't really get it. The sound was definitely interesting. I think the strange sound effects made this movie what it was, though they seemed to loop over each other (kind of hard to tell). Graphically it wasn't too interesting; a bit too simple to me, with not a whole lot going on at all. Overall, too short and not much content.

Score: 5

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submission: Happy Christmas (or w/e)

date: December 2, 2009

I'd have to agree that the song was pretty annoying, which took away from the animation a bit. Graphically this wasn't too impressive, though some scenes looked much better than others, which was odd. Really nothing memorable about this movie. Graphics really must be more interesting.

Score: 7

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submission: WildFire Project

date: December 2, 2009

A neat animation. The music was good, and I think you did a good job animating to it. The animations themselves were pretty smooth, and quite interesting to watch. Didn't really seem to have much fluidity or storyline, but nonetheless, a good animation. Cuts off a bit abruptly though.

Score: 7

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submission: Mr Agnry Faic 3

date: December 2, 2009

This game has its good and bad traits. The only game mode I think is really good is Paint'em, which was pretty cool. Though in this mode, you can hide in the bottom menu and be safe from everything. I feel that classic mode got too difficult too quickly. You should either make the faces generate slower, or have only two colors. The time trial game is pretty broken. Since you can only collect yellow faces, and they spawn randomly, I often found myself running out of time before a yellow face even spawned.

The game was presented very well though. Nice music and interface, though a replay button would have been nice rather than having to choose the game type each time.

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