Score: 8

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submission: Twilight Team Edward

date: December 1, 2009

As a dress up game, this actually functions pretty darn well. In fact, it's one of the best interfaces I've seen for a dress up game. Items automatically go back in the closet once you put on a replacing article. It's quite convenient actually. Graphically this was quite nice as well. Well done, regardless of the fact that it is Twilight, it's still a well-made dress up game.

Score: 5

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submission: Smoke's Rude Awakening

date: December 1, 2009

Eh, you've got some talent graphically. The animations were pretty smooth and the scenes were well detailed and drawn. I think taking tourettes guy audio is kind of lame though. That wasn't funny to begin with, so using it here isn't going to be that great. The only funny part was the very end. I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.

Score: 9

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submission: O Canada

date: December 1, 2009

This was pretty great. It made absolutely no sense in the first place, and the fact that it was set to the Canadian National Anthem made it that much more strange. I did enjoy the animations though. Their randomness gave me a chuckle. Smooth graphics with some nice effects as well. The file size probably could have been reduced though.

Score: 6

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submission: The Hell Are My Legs 8

date: December 1, 2009

Heh, only the second episode I've seen, but the humor is still there. Unlike the last episode, this guy just had sticks for legs, which I guess is funny since he is now a pirate. I expected his stick legs to suddenly disappear, as in the last episode. So this was an unexpected one.

Score: 3

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submission: An Apple a Day... Doctor

date: December 1, 2009

This really needs a lot more instruction to it. I'm trying to read your description on what to do, and honestly it makes very little sense. And playing the game to try to get a sense of what to do is pretty hard as well. There doesn't seem to be a consequence to doing anything, or any reward for doing other things. I'm quite confused.

Score: 7

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submission: Parry Gripp-Crunchy Taco

date: December 1, 2009

That was interesting. Ok animation, though I thought for such a short song you could have not reused some animations. Very nice drawings though, and comical in the way you presented this. Overall, a bit funny, but not very memorable.

Score: 4

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submission: Stickman Linkin Park

date: December 1, 2009

Ok, you've got some potential. You at least put some work into this, and it's obvious that you are new to Flash. On the plus side, you had some good images in here to go with the lyrics. You really suffered graphically though. The animations weren't very good at all, and the drawings were in the same boat. Keep working on it though, because you seem to have some potential.

Score: 5

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submission: Angel and the Fox

date: December 1, 2009

That was alright, I suppose. It's a simple story, that covers up any background, like why she is in the cage, which is kind of disappointing. Hopefully any future work on this story will reveal a bit more instead of covering it up. The music was a good choice, but the graphics were pretty lame. Animations were nil, and the use of mostly outlines was a bit cheap.

Score: 5

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submission: Low Resoluted Short Ep. 4

date: December 1, 2009

I'm not so sure about this. I can deal with no color, but you lose a lot of potential by having no sound. Regardless, the storyline didn't have much to it, not very interesting. Sometimes a movie can have a bad storyline and be saved by flashy graphics, but clearly not this one.

Score: 4

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submission: MW 2 in 28.3 Seconds

date: December 1, 2009

I enjoy the concept of the movie. These are generally pretty good. I guess I got a good feel from the game, you basically just go shoot shit at random places. Graphically this really suffered though. Your drawings need some improvement. Also, leave a little time for the viewer to actually see what the hell is going on.