Score: 3

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submission: Frivolous Sonic Spoofs 1

date: November 30, 2009

This was quite strange. It didn't have too bad of a plot. It was a little cliche, but I just couldn't get past the graphics and voicing. The voices were pretty hard to hear at times. You need a better microphone. And the graphics....No real animating, and why did everyone constantly have their arms out to the side? It's just really distracting and takes a lot away from the overall presentation.

Score: 6

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submission: Halcyon [red]

date: November 30, 2009

Well I guess it serves its purpose. It randomly plays sounds. Can't say they are really distracting...just there. I don't see much of a point in this, but whatever. The programming was good, as everything was random and the slider worked nicely. A neat little contraption.

Score: 4

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submission: Sprited Nazo Unleashed

date: November 30, 2009

What was that? I don't see really any need for lip syncing, as no one says anything. The animation itself wasn't bad, but there was no storyline and it just ended in a very odd place. Much shorter than I expected, and leaves a lot to be desired. Next time you should have some sort of storyline and dialogue, rather than just Sonic turning into a nuke explosion.

Score: 10

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submission: a kitty goes shopping 2

date: November 30, 2009

Fantastic. It's amazing what wonderful things people can shoot out, even with the worst of graphics. The music was out of place, but you did some syncing with the song, which was cool. Storyline was glorious. That cat was so fucking happy. It almost brings a tear of happiness to mine own eyes.

Score: 7

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submission: Tomffrey

date: November 30, 2009

Well, it had its moments. I enjoyed the way you did the voice overs, but DaisyClock should get a better microphone for future voice acting. It was humorous how this was molded after generic cop shows. Also, the cat definitely needs a bigger role in this series.

Score: 7

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submission: concentrating

date: November 30, 2009

Quite good actually. The storyline and the humor was definitely good in this movie. I enjoyed the jokes and got a few laughs out of this. I particularly like your use of music and camera effects to make certain parts seem really intense. Quite well done. The only thing you really need to work on are the graphics. Animations were a bit choppy throughout, and not much coloring either.

Score: 8

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submission: Do you have a waffle

date: November 30, 2009

Not the catchiest song that I've heard by you, but still a memorable animation. It definitely speaks the truth. Animations and drawings were excellent, as usual, with lots of good imagery and interesting scenes throughout the movie. The looping is a nice feature, as usual.

Score: 2

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submission: spitballed

date: November 30, 2009

Not really much in terms of content here. The best part was probably the poster on the wall. Not bad for a first animation though. Decent animation and sound effects. In the future though, more storyline and content is definitely needed. Not a bad start for your Flash works though.

Score: 7

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submission: The Little Barbarian

date: November 30, 2009

Short and simple, I enjoyed it. The movie was funny, if not a bit predictable, but the way you made it a video game at the end was interesting. Very good graphics and sound effects as well. Short and funny, but not very memorable.

Score: 8

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submission: Monopoly Reality

date: November 30, 2009

Quite funny overall to see good commentary on how silly the game of Monopoly is. The drawings were quite nice, and the animations were good, though I feel it needed a bit more than just two guys wavering back and forth the whole time. Also, the ending was humorous, but I feel that it was still a bit abrupt.