Score: 4

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submission: Bubbles Wassap

date: November 30, 2009

Well you took something that was already annoying and somehow made it even more so. The high pitch you added to this definitely isn't something that makes this good. Very annoying to listen to this. The animation was also sub par. Not very detailed or smooth in the animating.

Score: 2

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submission: figuritas

date: November 30, 2009

Let's see. You animated this fairly well. It definitely passes for OK animation. You also put in an awesome song, but cut it off way too short. I think there was too much animating going on in this simultaneously, so it was too hard to really see everything that was going on. You should have broken it down a bit. Maybe used some camera zoom to focus on a specific fight too.

Score: 1

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submission: kill all monsters TD

date: November 30, 2009

Well, it looks an awful lot like a template that I've seen used for these games. So the engine is good, but you didn't create it, so I can't give you credit for that. Your contribution to this game? The graphics and sound. There was no sound, so I can't give you anything for that, and the graphics were just a mess of ugly rainbow gradients and blobs. Really needs a lot of work. If you are going to use a template, at least make your contributions look nice.

Score: 7

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submission: Chaos High 2 p1

date: November 30, 2009

Ok, being that this is the second episode, you really need to cut down the intro movie. It's far too long for any flash, let alone the second episode of a series. The episode itself is very good. The storyline was interesting and the jokes were good. I laughed a few times throughout, so that's better than most. Now, the biggest thing you need to work on is your graphics.

Score: 2

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submission: Mario's Stupid Mistakes

date: November 29, 2009

Overall a very generic Mario movie. This idea of outtakes or mistakes as you call them has been done countless times before. The only one I really enjoyed from this was the one where Mario smashes his head on the invisible box. That was a good take on the game. The others though, were mostly just orgies of bad sound effects and animation. Work on your ideas.

Score: 9

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submission: Blood!

date: November 29, 2009

This was honestly pretty fantastic. I've never heard the song, and while I don't have much respect for MCR, you did a great job animating to it and really creating some good imagery here. I really enjoyed the blood spouting piano at the beginning. Really quite an interesting piece.

Score: 4

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submission: burning souls prolouge

date: November 29, 2009

Well this is a prologue, so I really expected some sort of storyline to develop here, but this was mostly devoid of that. Should have definitely developed the characters more. Dialogue was terrible and predictable. Please make sure you spell things correctly in your movies or no one will take you seriously. Other than that, the animation wasn't too bad, and the fight scene was well done.

Score: 6

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submission: Pick And Dodge

date: November 29, 2009

A simple avoiding game that is quite challenging. You need some good reflexes to finish all 60 seconds and get a good score. The concept is nothing new though. You didn't really add any bells and whistles to make this stand out from similar games. Some powerups or differing game types would have been sufficient.

Score: 7

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submission: Particles w/ Ty and Peter

date: November 29, 2009

A quick, funny flash with a simple science lesson smashed in there as well. Your drawings were pretty cool, as were the animations. I think they set this apart from a crappy movie. I enjoyed the ending. I was trying to figure out what scientific applications the giant freezer in the sky could be, but then it was just to smash shit. So a bit of an unpredictable ending as well. Nice job.

Score: 3

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submission: Hey, Cowboy

date: November 29, 2009

Well it has the graphics, which were pretty good. Nice drawings and animation of the clouds. That looked nice. Put your talent to work with something more meaningful. Something with a storyline and characters. This is funny for a bit I guess, just in it's randomness, but it gets old pretty quickly.